Nancy Oglesby
Jan 3, 2024

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The dialogue was fun! I'd recommend putting a return after each person stops talking. That would make it easier for the reader.

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Nancy Oglesby
Nancy Oglesby

Written by Nancy Oglesby

I explore life and tell stories! Embracing the world of Drabbles. Publisher of Fiction Shorts, the Challenged, and Another Fucking Publication

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