Nancy Oglesby
Jul 17, 2022

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I appreciate how much of your history and culture you explained here, but I have to also say that it might have been better to split it into at least two articles.

The article wanders around a bit too much, and I understand because your passion is clear, but if you could split it into two, one about your New Mexican culture, and one about Ms. Flores, albeit informed by your experience, I think it would be more powerful.

I learned a lot and enjoyed reading about the meanings behind the terminology.

Thanks for a lot of good stuff!

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Nancy Oglesby
Nancy Oglesby

Written by Nancy Oglesby

I explore life and tell stories! Embracing the world of Drabbles. Publisher of Fiction Shorts, the Challenged, and Another Fucking Publication

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